Posts tagged My Half of the Story

Title: My Half of the Story

Author: Tony Vinyoh

Number of Pages: 3

Publication Type: Short Story 

Summary: 

I think some people broke up? 

Star Rating: 0/5

Thoughts: 

I rate this story ‘zero of five stars’ because, to be frank, I’m not entirely sure what happened. Every paragraph was a single run-on sentence. I’m not entirely sure the author knows the difference between a comma and a period. There was very little other punctuation, people were speaking like the reader would already know what they’re talking about, and that’s pretty much it. If I had to hazard a guess, I’d say that the woman only loved the guy’s money and then broke up with him for some reason, but I wouldn’t swear to it. 

Download? Nonono.